Monday, August 11, 2014

The Difference Between a Tag and a Beat

In honor of Pitch Wars, here's a little post about a basic of writing.

Tag or Beat. Do you know which is which and how they involve writing. For many old hands, this is something they've learned long ago. But for newer writers, you may not have heard of them. It's easy for this distinction to skip your radar unless you have experience. I've seen many mistakes that are easily avoidable.

Tags and beats go with dialogue. Basically a tag is a sentence where you use 'said, asked, whispered, called, yelled, replied, answered,' any word that indicates someone is speaking.

A beat is an action. Your character is doing something while talking. Beats involve things like smiling, frowning, sighing, jumping, poking.

Why should you care these are two different things? What difference does it make if you can't tell tags from beats?

Because one gets a comma around dialogue and the other requires a period. Also the capitalization rules are different. And mixing up which gets what punctuation screams amateur.



Some examples of tags:

"Send me that full manuscript," the agent said.

"Where's your bio?" Brenda asked.

"I love this concept!" the mentor screamed.

The mentor whispered, "It's time."

"I have to have more," she said, "send it right away."

Note: also could be

"I have to have more," she said. "Send it right away."

What do we see here? No periods except at the end of the whole sentence, which includes the tag. Instead commas are used to end the dialogue. Why? Because tags by themselves are not a sentence. Thus no capital letter after the dialogue either, except for proper names. 

However, note that question marks and exclamation points do replace the comma. Also notice that when a tag goes between continuing parts of dialogue you don't use a capital letter on the second section.




Often you want to mix things up and avoid the extra wordage of tags. Now a look at beats:

"I'll never get this query right." Tootie sighed.

Blair smiled. "This is my best effort yet!"



"I like a challenge." She did a happy dance.

Natalie glared at both of them. "You dingleheads, I'll be the one picked."

"Girls, girls." Mrs. Garrett clapped her hands. "You give me a headache."

Here you will notice there are periods and punctuation all around. Why? Because you have two or more separate sentences. All sentences have capital letters. Unlike a tag, a beat is a sentence on its own.

But what if you have a tag and a beat? It's still handled as if one sentence.

Jo smirked and said,"Mrs. Garrett always has a headache."

"I can get this query right," Tootie whispered to herself, spinning on her skates.

"I can't wait for August 18th," they all shouted, while jumping in the air.


Commas and lowercase letters where needed, just like with a tag alone.

And here is one last special case to truly make it confusing. A beat between incomplete dialogue. Now you need dashes and no commas!


“I’ve got”—Brenda did a pretty twirl—“it all covered!”


So there's some explanation of tags and beats. Now bring on August 18th!

6 comments:

  1. "Wow!! After all my research, purchasing of grammar texts, and consulting with grammar professors this is EXACTLY what I needed!" she said. ;)

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  2. Michelle,

    Great article and very timely for Pitch Wars! I want to ask a clarifying question about dialogue interrupted by a tag. I'm under the impression that making it two sentences is permitted, e.g.
    "I have to have more," she said. "Send it right away."
    Thoughts?

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    1. That's also correct. I wanted to show an example of handling it as all one sentence, but either way works.

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  3. Whew! I'll stop rewriting my entire book now :-)

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  4. I've been sitting here for over 30 minutes trying to remember the name of a show I used to watch as a kid. All I could remember was my favorite character a tough girl named Jo, but I was too stubborn to Google. I stumbled on Laura Heffernan's PW tips which linked me here. I scrolled down and find The Fact of Life pic! That was the show! What a perfect coincidence!

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  5. Tremendous post. I wrote my first book not knowing any of this. 3 books later, I make a point to highlight it to every new writer for whom I CP or bets read. Critical stuff.

    Thanks!

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